Hello bloggers this week we could choose creative or informational writing,I choose creative it took me 2 days to complete my piece, it is on how a kids dream came true and it is telling you what could happen.
This is my story
Chapter 1
Going to the shop
As Joe walked out of his house he looked around. Everything seemed normal, but then he saw a man in black. The man looked at Joe then everything went black.
Jim was shaking Joe and telling him to wake up.
“Joe wake up now we need to get to the shop”.
“ where” said Jo, to the shop. Then Joe got up and then got dressed and then he told Jim his dream “very scary dream” said Jim now come on we need to get to the car. On the way to the shop Joe keeped thinking about his dream. Is it going to become true like all his 1000000000000 dreams? If it does then he better get ready. On the other side of his town his friend Jake was biking to the shop to get some milk. When he got the milk he went back to his house to drop off the milk. Then he went to Joe’s house but by the time Jake got there Joe was not home and so Jake just biked back down to his side of town back to his house. 30 min later Joe was at the shop but before he got into the shop he was stopped by a bulky Security guard standing at the shop door he stopped them then he took Joe to this place under the shop floor the walls were steel the roof was steel and the door was steel the whole place was made out of steel then the guard said “ wait here kid” and the the guard walks back up to the shop and said to Jim “you may enter the shop”
but then Jim said “where is Joe
and the security guard said “I will give him to you later” said the security guard
“but I want him now said Jim”
“I said I will give him to you later!!”
“Fine,” said Jim, then he entered the shop. Then the Security guard went to Joe who was under he tied his arms to a chair and then walked back up to the shop Joe was just sitting there thinking how he could escape. At the same time Jake was also Going to the shop will the same thing happen to him will he be trapped down under the shop with Joe.
Chapter 2
Entry Exit
Jake got to the shop and the Security guard didn't stop him He walked in and And started buying his food 1 hour later Jake had finished his shopping and walked out of the shop and he heard a yelling noise saying help Jim had also finished his shopping and then went to the Security guard and said
“give me Joe like you said”
“ok” said the Security guard then he went under the shop and grabbed Joe untied him and then gave him to Jim that was weird. Why did the Security guard do that ? Did the Security guard think he was dangerous or was this just the beginning. Joe woke up on his bed “what happened” said Joe
“You fell asleep in the car”
“Ok” said Joe then he went back to sleep. Joe woke up in the morning and said “what day is it”
“It is saturday” said Jim
Then Joe came to the Kitchen and said “What's for breakfast”
“Toast and bacon” said Jim
“Tasty” said Joe then he sat at the table “Jim why did the Security guard take me away”
“I don't know maybe he thought you were dangerous”
“how” asked Joe “it’s not like I have gun on me or anything”
“Maybe he thought something was not right about you”
“Maybe” or was this just the start of his dream was it
Chapter 3
Come true
Joe knew that his dream would come true because most of his dreams had come true in the past few years but this, this was one that he had never seen before he was going to die any day now he was trying to change his destiny could he. The next morning Joe asked
“Has most of my dreams come true”
“Yes” said Jim
“Do you think that my latest dream will come true”
“Maybe”
“Well if it does then I better get ready”
“You should” said Jim
Have you ever made your own story? Tell me in the comments below.
Hi Victor I really like your creative writing story but maybe next time you could make the words smaller otherwise all really really good.
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